Happy with the crit results. In general people agreed that the idea of the calender was a good idea and they visually like the way it looked.
Strengths
'Important concept. good use for it as briefings are the one thing you dont want to miss as their weekly'
'Clearly mapped out information. Starts + ends correctly - Reliable, specific information.'
'Size is perfect'
'Gradient colour works well, legible and clear'
'Thorough research and conventional design'
'Clearly presented'
Areas for Improvement
'concept stamement board needs more work and more details'
'Writing about your secondary research is important '
'Maybe make a way of making the calendar more dynamic so that if a date doesn't change it wont be irrelevant'
'Change the red on top of the orange because its hard to read'
'Include weeks'
'Experiment with gradient, see if colours fit the CMYK more'
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